Friday, December 11, 2015

A Satisfying Short Story

This course has been my first experience with short stories, and it has definitely been a great ride. We read such a variety of short stories, and I was exposed to so many different narrative voices, writing styles, and a huge variety of subject matter. For many of the stories that we read in this course, I wished that it had been a whole book rather than just a short story. I wanted to know more, and I didn’t want to accept the fact that this was the end of the story. Oftentimes the small glimpse we get into characters’ lives wasn’t enough for me. But for the short story “Adams” in our latest book, I was completely satisfied with it just the way it was. It was the definition of “short and sweet”, and it might have been the first time I was content with only seeing a glimpse of this character’s life. Although it was one of the shortest stories we read this semester, it might have also been the most hilarious story.

            There are a few major reasons why this story amused me so much. One reason why this story was so entertaining was because of its narrative voice. The narrative voice, the way Roger talked and explained things to us in itself, was very comical yet real. Through this story George Saunders continues to use unusual yet appealing narrative voices that we first experienced in “Jon”. The way Roger talks makes you feel as if you are watching his whole thought process. He basically says everything he thinks, and so you can see the different connections between his thoughts and why he came to a conclusion. Roger doesn’t try to clean his story up, he just leaves it the way it is and writes down whatever comes to him. I especially liked the part in the text where Roger said “So I wonked him again, as Lynn came in, saying, Hey, Roger, hey. With Roger being me.” (102). This passage in particular gave me this feeling that Roger was telling this story instead of writing it, and I could almost hear his voice in my head narrating this whole situation.


            Two other reasons why this was one of the most entertaining stories so far was because of its hypocrisy and absurdity. Roger throughout this story is obviously the one doing all of the wrong, “wonking” Adams (or at least attempts to) every chance he gets, barging into his neighbor’s house and knocking over his wife and children, and even stealing knives and guns and chemicals from Adams. Yet throughout the story Roger is planning ahead and preparing to react to the bad things that he predicts Adams to do. He even puts himself in Adam’s place and prepares to react to the revenge that he would take upon himself if he were in Adam’s shoes (What?). Overall the whole hypocritical and absurd situation taking place in this narrative was wildly entertaining for me. Did the rest of you enjoy "Adams" just as much as I did?